[Author's note: Fiction Friday! once again, with chapter eight of our novel, Bob the Mage, which I wrote some time back and have edited into better shape to share with you. When last we saw Bob, our fantasy adventure hero, he had washed up on a desert island where he met Astercam, a scholar formerly in the employ of the evil Morwor Mordrun Mormor (thunder sfx) at Castle Terror, and Bourbon the Unintelligible Barbarian. Bob believes that his princess, Suzy, for whom he has fallen like a sack of anvils, was killed in their shipwreck. But he has promised to help his new friends to make a vessel to escape the island.
Previous chapters can be found at these links:
chapter 7, chapter 6, chapter 5, chapter 4, chapter 3, chapter 2, chapter 1
And remember, if you're enjoying the book, tell a friend! If you're hating the book, let it be our little secret! And if you're undecided, get a second opinion! Here's one: It's great!]
Previous chapters can be found at these links:
chapter 7, chapter 6, chapter 5, chapter 4, chapter 3, chapter 2, chapter 1
And remember, if you're enjoying the book, tell a friend! If you're hating the book, let it be our little secret! And if you're undecided, get a second opinion! Here's one: It's great!]
We set to work that very afternoon. True to his word,
Astercam knocked off some rough blueprints for a sturdy raft to be made with
the local weak, splintery wood; the boards would be woven together and
reinforced with vines that, when treated with my heat spell, would give us a
strong construction that retained flexibility. I don’t know if Astercam was a
genius, but he sure knew a lot of things, which he used mainly to bore me on
our work breaks in subsequent days.
“Did you know that the Grumbus
plant, Fernus gilliganius, of the
southern islands can have as many as seventeen points on its leaves? Most
plants of that climate in that genus have no more than ten. Isn’t that
fascinating?”
“Grunt.”
“I once mentioned that to my friend
Passole, the composer. Have you heard of him? I suppose not. Fond of plants, he
is. Does a lot of atonal stuff, wonderful. Sounds like machinery grinding to a
halt. He was heavily influenced by the famed Magnelli.”
“Speaking of music, I think Bourbon
is serenading me again.”
“Such an awful row. Perhaps he’s
just hurt himself.”
“We can hope, but no, he’s
smiling.”
As the days passed it grew more
apparent that Bourbon was either playing for the other team, as it were, or
just desperate. Either way, while Astercam was not his cup of tea, it seemed that
I was.
“Don’t knock it,” said Astercam. “I
think he’s trying to impress you. Have you seen how fast he cut down all that
lumber? A mighty man is he.”
“But he’s just not my type.”
“Relax. We’ll be on our way soon.
Did I tell you about the paper I wrote on human sexuality? Now there’s a
subject. My paper was on the occurrence of same as related to the phases of the
moon.”
“Oh?”
“Yes. They aren’t related. It was
rather a failure, actually. Perhaps if I’d had a bigger grant I’d have
done good work in the field. Did you know—”
“No. Let’s get back to work.”
In a week, thanks to Astercam’s
planning, my spells, and Bourbon’s mighty labor, we had completed the raft. I
realized with some pride that it would have been impossible without me, as my
heat spell, lame as it was, was able to dry and tighten the vines we used in a
way mere fire could not. And Astercam cleverly used my glue spell, which never
did glue things in place as expected, to turn the mud he had composed into
actual pitch. The boat would never have been sturdy enough without my magic. As
it was, the thing groaned and squealed and threatened to split as we hauled it
to the beach. The question was, would it float?
No.
We pulled it back on shore, dried
ourselves off, and examined the problem further.
“Everything about the pitch was
terrific,” said Astercam, “except it was water soluble.”
Having determined that my spell was
not the issue, he turned back to mixing more saps and minerals and juices to
try to get something that would not dissolve on contact with the ocean. After
three dull days he had nothing.
On the morning of the fourth day I sauntered up behind him and said, “I think you’re in luck, Astercam. I think
Bourbon’s lost interest in me and is starting to look at you.”
We were ready to sail that
afternoon.
Astercam had made a chart and crude
compass, and Bourbon loaded the raft with dried fruit and gourds of freshwater.
I had replenished my magic supplies as best I could from the local flora. I was
eager to get off the island. If it meant we would drown, I could accept that,
but I couldn’t bear living in solitude, haunted by the memory of Suzy, by the
dread feeling that if she had not cared for me she might have stayed on the
Tegoran ship and lived.
I found out quickly that a couple
of weeks on land had robbed me of my sealegs. Forty feet from shore I felt
queasy; by fifty I was letting ’er rip over the side.
Our progress was slow at first, for
our simple sail couldn’t catch a breeze, but eventually one began to kick up
and we were on our way.
I don’t think we’d made it much
more than ten miles from the island when Bourbon gasped in terror. Astercam
screamed.
I turned my greenish face forward
to see what had scared them.
Seven enormous black clouds were
converging over us, bunching like the sky’s own fist. The thunder, when it
boomed, sounded like sinister laughter.
“It's Mormor! He’s been waiting for this
moment!” Astercam cried. “And now he’s going to destroy us!”
“Whatever,” I said, and heaved
again.
Bourbon leaped up, clutching the
tiller with one hand, screaming some macho threat in his awful language at the
storm while waving his ax with the other hand. I doubted Mormor would be given
to second thoughts over that display.
The storm played with us for a
while, as I puked and the others howled. The sail was ripped from the mast; the
tiller was useless against the waves that batted us back and forth. Rain
crashed down, just as it had on Suzy and me in our little boat, and similarly
there came a burst of lightning, and then I was once more floating in the
ocean—there’s an awful lot of ocean, isn’t there? too much—and clinging to a
piece of raft, my companions nowhere in sight. Déjà vu.
I could have drowned from the rain
alone, but the waves were fighting for the privilege. I feel certain I shouted
Suzy’s name several times, but I don’t know why. Somehow I managed to hold on
to the planks, although I was losing my grip on consciousness.
Then I opened my eyes and noticed
something very strange.
I was surfing.
The sky above was still black, but
the rain had slowed and there was a strong wind at my back. I was perched on my
bit of raft, riding the crest of a fast wave. How I got in that position I did
not know.
But I had my suspicions.
Ahead of me was nothing but water,
until a small blot of black appeared on the horizon. It grew in size as I drew
nearer, and it grew quickly. I was moving faster than I ever had by any means
before. The island was craggy and dark, apparently barren and made of jutting
rock. High atop the highest jut was a cold gray castle in the shape of a human
skull. The towers looked like femurs and the walls, assorted tibia. If that’s not Castle Terror, I thought, I’d hate to see what is.
A more pressing matter at the
moment was that I was racing at forty knots right for the sharp rocks that
ringed the island. Unless I wanted to end life as a red smear, I had to do
something. I dived off the wood into the wave, fighting against the wave’s
power as hard as I could with my pathetic muscles. Bourbon couldn’t have broken
free of that wave, so I had no chance, but I did change direction slightly.
While the planks of the raft shattered on the rocks, I shot between two of them
and into a cove. I was shoved up on a beach made of onyx sand.
I lay there for a while, orienting
myself with some constructive whimpering and a good session of trembling, and
then I got up to look around.
The whole island seemed to be made of
coal and obsidian, which seemed to suck the light out of the air. I saw not one
clam or crab on the beach, nor the slightest wisp of green. I thought that
whatever landed on this beach died immediately, and had to pinch myself to make
sure I was still alive.
I had to assume this Mormor
character wasn’t done playing with me. But why? We’d never met. I hadn’t even
had a chance to offend him yet. And if I had, he certainly could have finished
me off in the water, as I assumed he had Astercam and Bourbon.
By now I was too tired to be scared
anymore, so I started up the rocky path to the castle. If Mormor wanted me for
some reason, perhaps he’d tell me if I asked. Not like there was anything else
to do around that place.
I did want to make myself presentable—good
luck with that, I know. My clothes were rags, my hat long lost to the sea. The rain
finally stopped, though, so I decided to use my heat spell to dry myself off a
little. You have to be careful with that spell not to use the concentrated form
(the difference is a pinkie twaddle); done right, you can dry off quickly, but
done wrong you can shoot yourself a blister.
So armed with my new blister I
approached the castle. It didn’t have a moat, but then, the whole ocean acted
as one. The stones from which the edifice was built were cut in the very size
and shape of skulls--human, elf, dwarf, pixie, troll, you name it. I sensed a motif
here. The front doors were iron, twenty feet high. One had a keyhole shaped
like a screaming mouth. Both had gigantic iron rings, five feet in diameter. An
actual giant could pull on them or use them as knockers, but I didn’t even try.
I just rapped on the door with my fist.
Incredibly, words in the common
tongue appeared in red, fading into existence in the air before me: Servants’ entrance in rear.
“I’m not a servant,” I said. “I am…
Bob.”
The words vanished. Then, with a
squeal, the doors opened outward, slowly, creaking and howling every inch of
the way.
When they stopped moving I stepped
inside, into darkness. By themselves the doors slammed shut behind me. I hate
when that happens. I wandered forward, my eyes refusing to adjust to the
darkness. It stretched as far as the eye could not see. I grew sentimental for
the frying pan I’d been in, but it was too late for regrets about the fire now.
I pressed on.
After a time I saw a little square
of light, so I headed toward it. Did it flicker like a dying man’s spirit?
Can’t say. At least it broke up the monotony. And as I approached I smelled
food. Wonderful food. Beef roasting. Pork sizzling. Bread baking. Beer pouring.
Corn popping. Shrimp frying. No slop, gruel, hardtack, or underripe fruit. Just
the real stuff. I left a trail of drool like a slug down the hall.
The light was a doorway that opened
up into an opulent dining hall. It was done in high fashion, with elegant
bright-burning chandeliers, rococo wall carvings, softly cushioned high-back
chairs, everything gilded. Somewhere an invisible string quartet played. I’d
been in a couple of great halls before, usually trying for the silverware, but
I’d never seen anything like this. The endless table was laden with all the foods I’d
smelled, and many I hadn’t, and several that I’d never tried but surely wanted
to.
And then I saw, at the table,
wearing a delicate white dress, a tasteful tiara on her brow, my princess Suzy.
“Suzy! Is it really you?” I cried.
“Bob!” she cried back, knocking
over her wine goblet.
I stretched my arms to her and she
to me, and we started one of those runs alongside the table that seem
to be in slow motion, when suddenly another figure stepped in between us. I
almost kissed him by mistake.
He was not as tall as me, although
he looked healthier by a country mile, slender and sinewy, with short curly
hair and a neat pointed goatee. His robes were plain dark gray, but a glance
told me I had never felt such a soft and fine fabric. He wore a black tunic
beneath that covered him all the way to the neck. He smiled, his wide green
eyes looking kindly, and stopped my forward motion with a hand clasped gently
but firmly on my shoulder. In a smooth, soft voice, he said, “Welcome to my
home, mage Bob. I apologize for any inconveniences you may have suffered, but I
am so pleased you could join us at last. You know the lady, I see, but I
believe I must be rude enough to introduce myself.”
“No need, I’m sure,” I stammered.
“But I must. My name is Morwor Mordrun Mormor, but my friends call me Zippy. Do join us, I insist.”
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[Uh-oh! Can't you hear the ominous music? Or is that just Bob's empty stomach rumbling? What will happen now? Is that really Suzy? If she's alive, maybe Astercam and Bourbon are too! No, probably not. Why does a nice guy like Zippy seem to be so into skulls? Come back next Friday for chapter 9!]
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